Here’s my contribution to this week’s Friday Fictioneers prompt run by Rochelle here. This picture (copyright Melanie Greenwood) made me wish I was a kid who could play there! Visit Rochelle’s website weekly to check out her work and participate in her writing challenge, writing a story in 100 words or fewer based on the photo prompt provided. Click on the InLinkz frog below to read other wonderful stories based on the same prompt, or to add your own. Also, be sure to check out the Micro Bookends 1.17 results, posted later today. : )
Playing Fair
From the balcony, Sophie saw her son in the center of the hedge maze. Christopher hugged his knees and moved his head slightly, as if speaking and listening.
Later, making lunch, Sophie asked, “What were you playing, bud?”
Christopher shrugged.
“Who were you talking to in the maze?”
“Max.”
“Max?”
“A boy. He lived here before.”
“In this house?”
Christopher nodded. “But he fell off the balcony. He stays outside now.”
Sophie froze. “Does he scare you? Is he nice?”
Christopher grimaced. “We play hide-and-seek, but he disappears. That’s cheating.”
Sophie cleared her throat. “You’re right.”
This prompt reminded me of another maze-related piece of writing I worked on about trying to write when feeling blocked.
Good story! Twilight Zone kind. 🙂
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Thanks!
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I like your ghost story. Max shouldn’t disappear, that is cheating.
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I agree! Being a ghost is no excuse for cheating.
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Dear Emily,
Being able to disappear does give Max an unfair advantage.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Definitely. Thank you!
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Ha.Ha. ha.
Max never played fair. He didn’t fall off the balcony.
Little Johnny pushed him off, because he never played fair – and even now he still doesn’t.
Poor loser, the loser.
Good story, though.
Randy
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Yikes! I think Max is just a little spoiled, haha. Thanks!
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Really spooky and I don’t think I want to play with Max personally! Nice job of creating the atmosphere.
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Thanks! Yes, Max may be trouble.
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one thing about being a ghost, max can disappear without a trace. it can’t be cheating. it’s called gamesmanship.
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haha, I’m sure Max would agree.
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Gripping. I like this story of innocent friendship and fun – even if one is a ghost.
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Thank you!
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A lovely little story, Emily. Chilling to realise that Max is a ghost but, somehow, he didn’t seem the ‘threatening’ type. He just wanted to play with another child. The cheating idea was a nice touch.
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Thank you! He doesn’t seem threatening to me either, in the end.
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Oooh, I love a ghost story!
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This is a great little ghost story. Slightly chilling but also rather sweet. Disappearing during a game of hide and seek is definitely cheating! 🙂
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Haha–I think so!
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Great ghost story. It’s a good thing Max stays outside. He must be happy now he has a friend. Well done, Emily. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Disappearing is definitely cheating! Great story.
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