This story was written for Barbara Beacham’s Monday Finish the Story weekly challenge. Each week, Barbara provides an image and a first sentence, and the task is to complete the story in 100-150 words. Click on the InLinkz frog below to read others’ stories and, if you’d like, to add your own!
Lost
(1st sentence + 150 words)
Little did they know when the photographer took their picture that they would find themselves trapped in a painting. On seeing the photo in the school paper, the students became obsessed with music.
Will was a natural trumpeter.
The problem was the volume. When his parents fought, they didn’t want him to practice—and there was the new baby.
He loved the physical effort the trumpet demanded. When the field trip group played together, the music surged, and they felt strong. Afterward, they were breathless, spent.
They visited the painting. There were children in it now, faintly visible in the brush strokes, but getting clearer.
Will’s parents shouted nightly, and things crashed against the walls. The baby cried. He shut them out, playing. When they pointed their rage at him, he willed his soul through the metal, up into the air. His father took the trumpet and stomped. Will collapsed.
After the funeral, the children pointed at Will, playing in the painting, and shivered in anticipation of joining him.
Very well done Emily! I loved this tale! Thank you again for participating! I hope that you will join in again next week! Be well…. ^..^
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Thank you! I really got into writing this one!
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I am glad!
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This blew me away. So good. So awful. You are an awesome writer.
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Thanks, Margo!! I really got into this prompt.
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A very imaginative response Emily ~ Quite a sad finish ~ Well done ~ 🙂
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Thank you!
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Ooh, I’m imagining some sort of music-obsessed demon which feeds on the creativity of others, feeding off their obsession until finally imprisoning them forever…
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Maybe so… thanks for leaving your thoughts!
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Unique. Loved it
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I really like this! It’s sad and slightly chilling. Well done. 🙂
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Yes, it was sad and chilling but opened up the doors of family abuse that is reality in todays world. It seemed the children were almost wishing to join him in the picture soon. So sad.
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Thanks for reading and for your comment.
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So cool! Sad that he died in the end, though. This prompt is really pulling some brilliant ideas out of people. I love your take on it.
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Thanks! Yes, I’m enjoying reading everyone’s too!
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This was a great take Emily I really enjoyed reading your tale.
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Thank you!
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