This is my story for Barbara Beacham’s Monday Finish the Story weekly challenge. Each week, Barbara provides an image and a first sentence, and the task is to complete the story in 100-150 words. Click on the InLinkz frog below to read others’ stories and, if you’d like, to add your own!
Relationship Secrets
(1st sentence + 150 words)
The old typewriter had a mind of its own. It refused to produce the stories she wanted.
She tried to sneak up on it, typing at odd times of day and switching between poetry and prose.
She tried to placate it, having it serviced by a technician who specialized in such things. She whispered compliments about the delicate look of the keys and the sonorous “bring” at the ends of lines.
The machine would not be appeased. It wrote drivel. She thought maybe it laughed at her when she turned her back—a subtle sound—a settling of the keys.
Before long, she was begging. The typewriter should have known that desperation is dangerous. When it failed to respond to her pleas and stood unyielding under her tears, her desperation hardened into anger.
The typewriter found itself in the trash bin. There, in the dark, among the coffee grounds and crumpled tissues, it told its secret stories to itself.
Too bad it had to end up in the trash can among the coffee grounds and tissue. But it seems to be like a love gone bad – not much sense in trying to revive it. Great story!
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Thanks! I don’t think they were good for each other.
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No, not at all!
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Well, it brought it on itself! Nasty machine.
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Maybe so! Though maybe she had unrealistic expectations…
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I expect it could still be rescued by a literate dustman who could force the secrets out in the open ~ 🙂
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Someone out there might be a better match for the typewriter–though I’m not sure if force will cause it to yield up anything new! Thanks for reading : )
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I love the character you’ve given to the machine, Emily, and the ditterent ploys the owner used to placate or trick it into behaving. When it didn’t even respond to her pleas, it finally got what it deserved. The image you’ve painted of the tyewriter in the trash bin is excellent. A really well written story. 🙂
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Thanks!!
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What a dastardly machine! 🙂 Good story! Thank you for participating in the MFtS challenge! I hope that you return again next week Emily! Be well… ^..^
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Thanks! I plan to keep at it! : )
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That makes me smile! 🙂
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Certainly a machine not to be tamed Emily. Well done indeed…
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Thank you! Yes, I’m not sure she had the right approach.
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I like how you brought the typewriter to life. Good story. 🙂
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Thanks, Susan!
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I can so empathize with those emotions and love that the typewriter is telling its tales to itself.
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