This story was written for the weekly Friday Fictioneers photo prompt from Rochelle Wisoff-Fields on her blog, Addicted to Purple. Check out her blog and click on the blue InLinkz frog below to read other stories and to add your own.
By the way, I have some news: I am honored to be the winner this week of the Three Line Thursday contest! Check out the link to see the stunning photo prompt and to read my entry along with some other fabulous responses. This context runs each week, so if you’re not writing three lines already, you could be very soon!
Returning
(100 words)
Struggling to see through the planet’s haze, they almost missed the station.
“Thank God,” Ray said.
“They must be worried,” Maya said. “So long. They—“
The station door was ajar.
They clutched their guns, advancing.
The only thing out of place was a large green stone in the center of the empty room.
“Maybe they went to find us?”
“No,” Maya said. “We’d have seen them.”
She grimaced, aiming her gun at the green rock. Suddenly, it began to crack and expand. Unable to move, they watched until it became something with a mouth. Then, it was too late.
Cool! I guess this life form is so alien that when in rock form they didn’t even know it was there, waiting to eat them up 🙂
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Exactly! I’m not sure what they could have done.
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wish they had not returned
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I’m sure they do… Thanks for reading!
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Quite a homecoming!
Rosey Pinkerton
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Dear Emily,
Something with a mouth brings all kinds of images to mind and none of them are pleasant. 😉
Congrats on your story, going to check it out now.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hi Rochelle–
Thanks so much for your comments and for reading!
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Uh oh! I’m glad she has a weapon although will she want to use it? What if if contains’s or is her friend? Nice one!
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Good questions! Or perhaps she cannot use it, or it wouldn’t do any good. Thanks!
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I used to like green rocks.
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: ) The ones on this planet are probably fine.
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What a great ending, a green rock with a big mouth … Friend or foe, to shoot or not shoot…? A very intriguing story, Emily. Well written. And many congratulations on winning the Three Live Thursday contest.
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Thanks, Millie! It’s a fun contest if you’re looking for something to do on a Thursday–you should try your hand at it! : )
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Thanks, Emily. I might just do that once I get back from Spain. 🙂
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Really liked this story. You managed to fit a lot of action into a very short space. Well done 🙂
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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. : )
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