This flash fiction story was written for Friday Fictioneers, the weekly prompt provided by Rochelle on her blog, Addicted to Purple. We get a photo for inspiration and no more than 100 words to tell a story. Be sure to visit Rochelle’s blog to take a worthwhile look into her world! Also, if you’d like to read more responses to this prompt, or if you’d like to add your own, click on the blue frog below.
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That morning, I saw the birds on the wire and knew they’d seen what I’d missed: my father’s disappearance.
I used to imagine someone kidnapped him, and he’d escape and return…or I’d rescue him. Now, I know he must’ve willingly walked into the foggy ether. Did he look back? Probably. Most people would. But it doesn’t count unless you go back.
He’s in the waiting room now, to interview for a job. Will he recognize me?
In the end, I hire him. He thanks me.
I’m a masochist. Or a sadomasochist. We’ll both pay for what we’ve done.
Mysterious, atmospheric and full of remorse. Beautiful.
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Thanks, Neil!
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This sounds like the start of an interesting working relationship! Nicely written.
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haha, yes! Not a very honest place for father and child to begin reconnecting, but there’s potential for family drama!
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Dear Emily,
Mysterious indeed. So did the father have amnesia? It would make for an interesting story. You leave the reader with questions, in a good way.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle. I don’t imagine the father with amnesia. I think he walked away from the family out of fear (of responsibility….) and now, he doesn’t recognize his daughter, especially not with her new name, but she recognizes him.
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Looks like trouble ahead, yet seems to be a sadness in this tale. Intriguing. Mike
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Yes, trouble and sadness, both, I think! Thanks for reading, Mike!
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Yes! Original and intriguing. Great ending. I hope there’s forgiveness, though.
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Thank you! Maybe forgiveness eventually, though I suspect she needs to hurt both herself and her father first.
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Oh, now THERE’S something to explore.
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