This flash fiction story is for Friday Fictioneers, the weekly prompt Rochelle Wisoff-Fields gives us on her blog, Addicted to Purple. We get a photo and no more than 100 words to tell a story. This week’s photo is from John Nixon. If you’d like to read more responses to this prompt, or if you’d like to add your own, click on the blue frog below.
Pieces
(100 words)
It was supposed to be funny, but seeing clown legs kicking out cacophonous chords on the piano made me anxious. Where was the rest of the body?
I shuddered.
“You too?” The man beside me smiled sympathetically.
I shrugged. I’d seen many things that shouldn’t exist: pieces separated, mixed and combined. My dog had a clear plastic abdomen where goldfish swam. My uncle considered himself a Dr. Frankenstein. He was talented, but learned no lessons from his predecessor.
I was one of his hybrids. This man smiling at me would be surprised if he saw me without these baggy clothes.
Really original. I like this!
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Thanks! : )
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Refreshingly different!
My 100 words!
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Thanks, Keith!
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The dog’s abdomen was a lovely touch
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Thanks, Neil! I enjoyed writing this one.
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Love this! What a great twist to the prompt. Very imaginative. It took me a while to come up with mine, but I would never have thought of a sci-fi twist. Nicely done 🙂
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Thanks, Lynn! I had fun with this, though my first look at the prompt stumped me.
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They hit me like that sometimes to. But often, they can turn out to be the best stories and this was a smasher 🙂
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Since he is a hybrid…wondering what parts he has under those baggy clothes!
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Haha–the narrator’s definitely not telling! Thanks for reading and commenting!
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I wonder what about his private parts… wonderful and original take.
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Thanks, Bjorn! This one was fun to write. The picture reminded me to keep trying new things with my writing!
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Great take on the prompt. A pretty scary vision of the future of genetics!
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Thank you! Yeah…I don’t think the uncle has the best intentions!
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Excellent.
Says just enough, and lets our imaginations run riot.
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Thank you! I appreciate your comment and I’m glad I achieved what I was going for! : )
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A fun reminder that we all have secrets! I wonder what hers are.
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Thank you! Yes, I am sure there are more secrets than just the physical makeup of the body, given her or his strange uncle!
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How graphic was the dog’s abdomen…? Nice one.
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Thanks, Sandra! Poor dog. : )
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Dear Emily,
Love the dog’s abdomen. Now i wonder what are those baggy clothes hiding??? Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Haha, this poor narrator–I don’t think there was much choice in being part of the uncle’s experiments. Thanks for hosting, reading and commenting, Rochelle! This photo prompt made me really think!
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Very clever story. But I don’t ever want to see him without those baggy clothes!
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Hi Perry! Thanks for reading and for your thoughtful comment!
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Humorous!
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Thank you!
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Original take and the goldfish bowl stomach is brilliant. I can picture it and if Dali had thought of it, he would have painted it.
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Thank you so much! I very much appreciate this comment!
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The Frankensteins always were a scary family. That’s why I prefer the Frank-N-Furters. Great story.
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Haha–Thanks! Yes, the Frankensteins made some questionable choices…and faced the consequences.
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Nice twist! 🙂
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Thank you, Josslyn! : )
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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A unique interpretation of the prompt, with a compelling twist. The reader can imagine all kinds of things, wondering what manner of surgical defilement lies beneath the baggy clothes.
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Very interesting take.
Loved it.
🙂
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