Sorry for some of my late replies last week. That election was a shocker. (By the way, if you’re interested, I had a story, “The Magic,” inspired by current events recently published with Necessary Fiction–please feel free to check it out.) And it didn’t help my writing that my little one has been teething something wicked–but still feeling lucky and happy to be home with her this year (and tutoring part-time) before going back to work full time next fall.
This story was written for Friday Fictioneers, hosted by wonderful writer, Rochelle, on her website, Addicted to Purple. Each week, she provides us with a photo prompt and her own story, and we have 100 words to respond with out take. Anyone is welcome to participate–just give credit to the provider of the photo prompt (this week, thanks to Bjorn!), write your own story, and click on the blue frog below to read others’ work and add a link to your own.
Love
(99 words)
Before Jodie was one, she shouted, shook maracas, and banged on every surface. She bounced when music played, clapping and smiling her gummy smile.
When she was seven, she played the guitar by the pond, and the fireflies hovered around her, bobbing gently with the music.
At ten, she played a trumpet solo that filled everyone in the audience with confidence. The principal had her play during the morning announcements, to dispense daily courage.
When she fell in love, she snuck into the church and played her cello. Light gathered. Momentarily, everything in her and around her was holy.
Covered a lot in a few words, nice touches of description. I wish I had been a musical prodigy, alas not to be! Nicely done.
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Thanks, Iain! I am not a musical prodigy either, sadly, though I am a music lover!
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She sounds like quite a musical inspiration.
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Yes, she definitely has a gift!
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It sounds like she found her instrument at last…
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Yes, or maybe her general musical gift has gotten that much stronger!
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Om my word, what a wonderful story! My little granddaughter danced before she could sit up, so perhaps she’s heded the same way.
Congratulations on your published story, and my heartfelt sympathy re the teething.
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Thanks on all counts, Lizy! Your granddaughter sounds impressive–maybe I’ll get to watch her onstage one day! : ) In any case, I think all we Friday Fictioneers writers know the joy of artistic expression. I read and loved your story this week, but am still flummoxed with posting on blogspot blogs–I did some research today, and am still not sure what’s wrong. I used to be able to, but now can’t get past the preview/publish button–it just keeps cycling me back to the preview endlessly without publishing the comment. Anyway, thanks! : )
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Dear Lynn,
Your story is lovely, lilting and lyrical. Congratulations on the story publication. I will check it out.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle! I appreciate it. By the way, I’m on a book-buying hold at the moment until financial circumstances improve, but your books are on my return-to-shopping list!
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Dear Emily,
My books will keep. Perhaps, by then the third one will be out. Happy Thanksgiving.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Beautiful piece, Emily. The pacing is lyrical, and the story balanced… but just beautiful, in total. Congratulations on the publication of your work!
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Thank you very much, Dawn!
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Oh teething! Fab story Emily.
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Yes, poor baby! Thanks, Louise!
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Such a beautiful, uplifting story.
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Thank you! : )
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