The following story was written for the weekly Mondays Finish the Story prompt, run by Barbara W. Beacham. Click on the blue InLinkz frog below to read other stories based on this photo prompt and first line, and add your own!
Games
(1st sentence + 150 words)
“After losing her head, she realized that the rest of her body was falling apart!” Errol said, tearing the arms from his little sister’s doll and dropping them beside the head and legs. His sister, Bronwyn, had tears in her eyes.
“Eh, Bronny?” Errol grinned with his missing front tooth, dangling the naked torso.
Bronwyn went inside and up to Errol’s bedroom, stopping in the kitchen on the way. She scooped Errol’s toy soldiers into one of Mama’s cooking pots and topped it with the glass lid. She slipped out the front door, set her cooking pot on the driveway, and went to watch a video. Later, she collected her green plastic stew and placed it on Errol’s bookshelf.
When the truth came out, both children were punished. Their parents, however, failed to see the greater danger. The children took a cold-hearted delight in causing anguish. Perhaps, if their parents had seen this clearly when the children were still young, something could have been done.
Oooh, this is quite chilling. I wonder what became of them… Nice work!
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Thanks, Sonya!
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Creepy! I must be just as sick because I thought the retribution Bronwyn took was perfectly justified and truly fit her brother’s crime. I enjoyed your unique take!
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Thanks, Lisa! I do see Bronwyn’s point of view…but I get the sense that these children are doing things like this a lot!
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I see stories in the future featuring the two battling siblings! 🙂 Well done Emily! Thanks again for writing for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge! Be well… ^..^
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Thanks, Barbara! I could see another story with these siblings! I’ll have to return to them. An intriguing photo this week!
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Its scary stuff.. i wouldnt want to know.
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Pressed ‘Post’ before I completed. I liked the story though its a bit scary.
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Creepy children!
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Nice ending – it looked like simple sibling rivalry but it looks like things are going to escalate in the future. A pair of budding sibling sociopaths perhaps.
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Possibly! I think they get a lot scarier.
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All I could see was sweet revenge. LOL!
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Yeah, Bronwyn does get hers!
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Oh.. what a twist…. I would love to read their later exploits!!
Good job!
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Thank you!
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Gee I wonder what they did when they grew up, with that kind of start? Great story- leaves you with so many questions!
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Such animosity between the siblings. Great story.
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Thanks!
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