The following story was written for the weekly flash fiction prompt provided by Barbara Beacham on Mondays Finish the Story. We get a photo and a first sentence, and then 100-150 additional words to make a story. Click on the blue frog to read other responses to the prompt or to add your own story!
What Comes Next
(1st sentence + 149 words)
The team employed the use of Nightshade to get the information they wanted from their captive. She was disoriented. She hadn’t eaten and they hadn’t let her sleep. Now, they were threatening her with one of the last poisons left in the new world.
The problem for the team was that she didn’t care. She was stalling, seeing what fate would bring. She was not here to alter death’s course if it was set, especially when she knew what came after death.
She’d join the mostly invisible ranks of the ghosts. She’d become deadly, as fast as she could.
The team didn’t want to kill her, of course. She understood that. She was supposed to become scared, desperate enough to say yes to whatever they wanted.
She wouldn’t. She was the center of the resistance. They didn’t know, or they’d be using different tactics. Her group understood the harmony between life and death. The team wanted to elongate life forever. That was not the way.
Very good! She knew that wasn’t the way to elongate life. I really liked her nonchalant manner.
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Thank you! I’m sure she has some tough moments ahead. This prompt took the story to a dark place for me!
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I understand, it did me too.
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Excellent story Emily! Most think one would succumb, but your captive has different values. I enjoyed this POV. Thank you for writing again for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge, and be well… ^..^
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Thank you! I’m intrigued by her world–I might need to try spending more time there.
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You should. She is an excellent character!
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Like the story. In fact, it looks like a there could be a whole story before and after this. Good one.
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Thanks!
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Well done, she sounds like a strong person.
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Thank you!
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Excellent take Emily, enjoyed your tale.
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Thank you!
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It sounds like once she’s dead she’ll be even more of a threat to them as a deadly ghost. A bit like Obi-Wan Kenobi! Great story.
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haha–thanks! Yes, they don’t know who they’re dealing with!
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